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Crimsona

  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Modern Life

    Hey there! Crim here to review your poem. I can relate all too well to this poem - it pretty much sounds like the story of what my summer holidays ...

    May 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Dramatic Re: What Disturbance in Sleep May Lead One To Do

    Hello there! Crim here to review your poem. Ah, your poem reminds me of some of my early stuff! (Although it's a lot better than what I used to write) ...

    Apr 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: Let our Fingers Dance

    Hello there, Crim here to review your poem! Firstly I just want to say that I adore your imagery here, it's absolutely gorgeous - clouds guarding the horizon... I love ...

    Apr 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Science, Humor Re: Coder's Lament

    Hello there! Crim here to review your poem. Oh jeez, my father is a software programmer and I have to deal with his lamentations throughout the day and night when ...

    Apr 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Mixed Feelings

    Hello there, Crim here to review your poem! This is a very strong and powerful poem. It speaks to me in particular because I can most definitely relate the the ...

    Apr 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: She could almost be beautiful.

    Hello there, Crim to review your poem! I do like this poem, it's very matter of fact and it's not too airy fairy which I do like! However my big ...

    Apr 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: What is Love?

    Hello there, Crim here to review your poem. This is a very sweet poem and I have to admit the ending made me laugh a lot! You have got a ...

    Apr 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Scars

    ​​Hello, Crim here to review your poem. The topic of this poem is very sensitive so I will try not to critique the content but rather your technique. I apologise ...

    Apr 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: The Martians Killed President Kennedy

    Hello, Crim here, attempting to review your poem, Oh jeez I absolutely adore this poem. You really have a talent; the flow, the rhymes, the topic... *squeals* Sorry, I can't ...

    Apr 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: Their Light

    Woah. This poem is so powerful! Like the other one I reviewed, it has such raw emotion in it. You seem to have a real knack for rhyming. Sometimes trying ...

    Apr 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Not For Me

    Hello there, Crim here! As RoyalHighness also said, I won't properly critique your piece as it is personal - besides, I can't actually see anything to nitpick anyway. I love ...

    Apr 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Science, Other Re: Rain

    Awh I do like this poem, rain is so beautiful and such a lovely topic! Don't get too hung up over trying to make your poem rhyme, the rhythm and ...

    Apr 9, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The words on these walls

    I really love this poem, I can really relate to it and I think it's always a good thing if you can get your readers to be able to relate ...

    Apr 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The flowing word

    Oh I love this! It definitely has the beauty of the flowing word. I love the flow of your style, it's so easy to read and this poem really put ...

    Apr 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: You'll never read this.

    I really liked this poem actually. I'm not usually a fan of simplistic poetry but I think it really worked. The only stanza I didn't think really worked was this ...

    Sep 6, 2012


I have lived through much, and now I think I have found what is needed for happiness. A quiet secluded life in the country, with the possibility of being useful to people to whom it is easy to do good... then rest, nature, books, music, love for one's neighbor - such is my idea of happiness.
— Leo Tolstoy