Crimsona

Hey Retro, that's a relief. I don't think I could handle another two years of it if I'm honest - I don't mind the act of revising but the content ...

Deanie! Sorry for the lack of reply or thanks - I didn't see this until now :o I totally get your point about the 'alright', I didn't really like it ...

Ah yes! I've heard that the education system in Sweden is about a million times better than in England. You're completely right about forgetting information that you can't apply, it's ...

That's amazing, I'll have to get myself one of those! ;)

Thank you for your review - I don't know where you come from or what your accent is, but I have an English accent so the two words rhyme like ...

Don't even get me started on that man... he is the epitome of all things evil.

And 'he opened to the dairy sir had handed him to the page with the cellotaped keys.' < you may want to switch the a and the i around, unless ...

Hello again, just another thing I noticed: 'We were wearing our winter uniforms even thought we were supposed to be wearing the summer ones. ' ^ I think that the ...

I'm not here to leave a review because I'm definite that I could not do your writing justice. Just something I noticed, a slight grammatical slip up: 'His parents care ...

Thank you for your review! You are so right about the comma splices - I can't seem to get out of the habit of doing them! I'll have a tweak ...

Thank you very much for your review, it's always nice to hear positive feedback. :)

Thanks for your review - I totally see where you're coming from with the over down fairy tale reference, you're completely right but I'm very glad that you thought I ...

And I certainly wouldn't say I'm the best poem ever, hehe, that's very sweet of you though, but I've got a long way to go before I can even come ...

Thank you for your review, I really liked some of your suggestions so I may make some changes! Thanks again.

Awh you are so so very sweet. I understand what you say about the contradictions - but that was sort of the point. Yes, I'm naturally a brunette with dyed ...