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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Deadly Party Part 1: Introductions

    really good poetry requires a really good understanding of language. You need to find ways to make words work for you. What words paint an image in your mind? What ...

    Mar 9, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Past

    really good poetry requires a really good understanding of language. You need to find ways to make words work for you. What words paint an image in your mind? What ...

    Mar 9, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Southern Summer Soliloquy

    really good poetry requires a really good understanding of language. You need to find ways to make words work for you. What words paint an image in your mind? What ...

    Mar 9, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Camping Trip

    really good poetry requires a really good understanding of language. You need to find ways to make words work for you. What words paint an image in your mind? What ...

    Mar 9, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: you will be loved.

    The language in this poem just doesn't do a thing for me. There's a way to use simple language like this and make it work in poetry, but you just ...

    Mar 9, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Place

    The language in this poem just doesn't do a thing for me. There's a way to use simple language like this and make it work in poetry, but you just ...

    Mar 9, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Tourist

    The language in this poem just doesn't do a thing for me. There's a way to use simple language like this and make it work in poetry, but you just ...

    Mar 9, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Please Delete

    A very moving and intesting story, definately one of my favourites. My favourite line was: "Sanura," my father spoke in a kind patronising tone, "would you like to go to ...

    Mar 8, 2008


By the sweat of your brow you will eat your food until you return to the ground, since from it you were taken; for dust you are and to dust you will return.
— Genesis 3:19