Crysi

This is absolutely amazing! I love it! I'm short on time here, so I can't critique it very much.. but there's really nothing to critique, that I see! It reminds ...

That is some incredibly sick humor. I love it. :lol: As much as I love the muppets.. this was freaking hilarious lol! A bit graphic, but I could totally imagine ...

I LOVE THIS!!! I rarely read scary stories anymore.. but this is EXCELLENT! I love how you use present tense.. and it's just such a creepy atmosphere.. Gah, it sends ...

Dude.. everything here takes up a lot of space. WHY WORRY ABOUT IT?? This site is made for using up that space by submitting stuff like this! Thanks Incandescence. I ...

*sigh* You KNOW I'm obsessed when I'm about to skip that huge last post, but go back and read it because my eye caught the word "dragon." :roll: Anyway.. Very ...

*nods* I agree with everything Mesh said. And the first part was a little confusing to me, although that might be because I only got four hours of sleep last ...

I love this poem!! One of my favorites now lol. Very nice!! Mittens.. about the cliffs being miserable while the narrator is not.. I think she explained that in the ...

That's cool. It reminds me of both Tale of Two Cities and my own story. It starts out dark and mysterious, then focuses in on one point - the stained-glass ...

Those are cool! I like them. Abstract, and yet they sometimes get a certain feeling across.. My favorite one is the second one. I was about to quote a particular ...

*agrees* :D I love this! I can feel the suspense, and imagine the feelings two different ways: Being an actual suicide bomber, or having something happen to you that completely ...

Wow. Alright, I'll be truthful here: It's kinda confusing. But the end is powerful, and I like it a lot. A sloitary figure Should be solitary, not sloitary dirt turns ...

Very cool. When I was reading it, I actually read it faster than usual, because I felt, well, rushed! :D I love how you gave the sense of being rushed. ...

*Feels an intense longing to sing in Honors Choir again* Beautiful.. That accurately describes what it's like to sing in a choir, when everyone has been carefully selected from the ...

I agree.. it confused me a bit, I didn't know who was talking when the speech wasn't in quotes. Still, it was pretty good.. I don't know, I think Myriadne ...

Very cool. Kinda gives a feeling of how insignificant we really are, and how easy it is for God to create and destroy us.. "I brought you into this world, ...