Cspr

Very nice! Especially for a person your age (no offense--it's just I only am decent now, ha-ha). In general, I like it. He has such an awed look on his ...

I like the terrier and the flowers the most, I think. Because a) I like dogs, b) they were both well done, c) I could tell the dog was supposed ...

AN: So, ahem. I entered a lovely contest hosted by Azila and have finished my entry already. Yeah. The dead-line is June 1st. I may possibly be golden. Anyway, the ...

CALEB I glanced up as I heard loud footsteps. Lucan was stalking towards me and I shrunk back against my car. "Not very useful information, huh?" I ask. He glowers ...

O.O Whoa, very...creepy. (That description suits it.) Otherwise, kudos for the unique style. It's interesting to look at and...I can't find anything to compare it to. Excellent. For a critique: ...

Thank you for the links! I've read books like "Leviathan" and some of "Time Machine", but I just wanted to know what 'mainstream' was and what I should avoid doing ...

So...I'm quite new to the genre--steampunk. It's a mix of skiffy and historical (Victorian era) if I remember (and have my head screwed on right today). However, I was wondering ...

Charon I decided that the White Kingdom was a rather stupid place. Or maybe it was just the madness--slowly seeping, claiming everyone. I wrinkled my nose in distaste and tried ...

Charon I smirked. The descendants had been claimed. Where I was crouched in the red and purple ferns beside the place-of-no-return, I could see them clearly. There was a lad ...

AN: First off, I will say, briefly--I have no idea. I wrote this last night at roughly 10 or 11 pm. I was tired. I'd taken sleeping medication. I heard ...

Hello, Cspr here. I figured I might as well do this, rather than mucking about looking for things I might like to read to review. Simpler. More streamlined. Yes. Anyway, ...

*raises hand* I have a fantasy novel that could use a review. It is sort of sword and sorcery mixed with magical realism and my own depressing honesty. It is ...

Okay, Skins, this is fexcellent. Very emotional, but not as far-fetched angsty as most 'suicide' stories I read are. (They're always like: "But you have so much to live for!" ...

My suggestion is: Pretend everyone knows about it. I mean, it might come as a shock, but if everyone has a chi, then why explain it? Everyone knows! The reader ...

CHAPTER THREE Savena When Coh woke up, he felt like he’d surfaced from a depth he’d never managed before. His ears hurt and he shook his head, unsure of where ...