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Tick tock Tick tock time flies by Moments left before I die I go backwards, begin to think About chances that I let sink Hidden feelings never revealed All my ...

HI again. This is a poem I did this year. And as I always say,read, comment, check, review, correct if necessary. I'd really like some help with this poem. (It's ...

Okay, so you seem to focus on metaphor way too much. Poetry should be a balance between imagery and thought. Granted, there are some pieces that are purely metaphorical, but, ...

Hey all! This will be my second piece that I've uploaded. Basically I had this idea one evening when I was out walking. In my head the idea was much ...

On Wednesday afternoon At almost five to four God did something awful That should be against the law [COLOR="red"]So far your imagery is rather lacking. On Wednesday afternoon? Who cares ...