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Thanks for the wonderful review, RebelWriter!

Yes, I agree. :D

Thanks so much for your review Morrigan! I changed it now, and tell me if its better!

Thanks! Yes, I agree, repeating that sentence was not a good idea. I changed it now, so tell me if its better!

EternalRain, thanks a lot. I thought I could give the reader a hint that the light is the sun, but I guess not. :D So now I changed it, and ...

u r welcome my friend :D

Great idea! I can wait to read it again!

Kate, I loved reading all these really nice and supporting words! Thank you so much, and I wrote this because I wanted to show people that someone is always here ...

Thank you EternalRain! To answer your questions, yes, she is wasting her precious time. Sorry if that's hard for you to understand. She id buried in sadness, but I am ...

Thanks so much! I am new here, and I love reading other people's advice. Thank you very much!

Oops sorry when I said add commas and bad periods, I meant add commas and SOME periods. Sorry.

OHhh nice!

No problem. And that's a lot for the profile fix up. :3 Ur a awesome writer! Don't stop writing!

They that's ok ur wayyy better than me

Thanks so much. That's why I loved reading ur poem about the hand. They are so similar. Thanks again.