CuteBalletDancer7

This was a good song. I like the chorus a lot. Just letting go and being yourself is a good life lesson; you don't want to hold onto something that ...

Hello, I got to say that this is a good poem. I think that you used repetitive quite well and had a nice flow to the poem. A few things: ...

This is great work. From the first chapter to the second chapter, you kept my attention, which is always a good thing to have. I hope you contuine, even if ...

Hello, I saw your picture of the main characters (which was really good by the way) and I was suddenly curious about the story behind it. I have to say ...

This is a lovely song. I'm not sure how to edit a song, but I can tell you that the song had a nice flow and good lyrics. "But she ...

Oh my, what a beautiful story :D You did a great job. You had great voice and emotion. I love the rain, and walking in the rain with the one ...

I enjoyed this poem :) because I can relate to it. Sometimes short poems aren't so good, but I believe that this short poem is good. There are a few ...

That was a good poem. :) There were some great lines like: "Eyes of the deep green forest I would travel." "Nights of passion and days of laughter." "Love is ...

That was really good. Good job. I like how you didn't know that the main chararcter is a girl till later in the story. Nice ending :). I actually found ...