Cynder

Mind if I review this? Cynder here. I liked your piece, and agree with some of the things others have said. However, I don't agree with what someone said: which ...

Can I review please? That was really cool, oh my gosh. OKay, so you just handed me am adventure on a plate, very nicely done. I'm a little confused though ...

Ooh... this was really cool! :) I love the emotion you put into it, and honestly I've felt the very same way many, many times. I'm glad I saw it ...

Well, may I review/comment on this? I agree with the others--stunning. I could learn a lot from you about writing, and how to write about emotion. Your work was very ...

Not that you want any critiques, but Cynder here. I have allergies, too. I *hate* them as well. Anyway, here's my o[pinion: I think this can be developed further still. ...

Mind if I try? I think I know the feeling, because this is like that piece that's good enough to be stuck in your head but there's something very wrong ...

Cynder here. I think, like a lot of the others, that your underlying message was really cool. Some parts could be a little more edited though. I should know, as ...

Wow.. well done. I don't know how real or not this is for you, but it's pretty real for me. Had a guy, got really close, he backed off, he ...

Well done for not being good at reviewing poetry, @Wolfare1 That was quite good. I think though, you should change something. Let's see if I can explain this XD So, ...

Hey, Cynder here. I like this poem, as I recently did a poem on beauty myself. My own has a lot of editing to be done, so I would like ...

Hey Cynder here to review. You don't have to take my advice, but in case you want to, here it is. I think you are trying to make a point ...

Haha, wow! It seems you have gotten a lot of reviews on this, yet you still want to improve it. I like your spirit! The story is touching, but I ...

Hey Cynder here with a review. So first off, I loved your poem. Now for bad stuff-well could be better stuff. The first two lines I think could be rephrased. ...

So.. I'm gonna try and write review on something so beautiful and true to my heart. I know the feeling, and actually I just was able to get in contact ...

Hey Cynder here. Nice poem, I loved the raw feeling I got from it. With that, let's begin. I think you can add more emotion to the end without saying ...