Cyvain87

Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed/related to this poem. I have since recovered some from the situation at the time but something still remains at the back of my ...

Thank you very much for your comment and grammar input! My fatal weakness that.

I was thinking about that at the time but that felt like I would have been repeating the same word from two lines above too soon.

Well as I said it is a very basic raw small bit I wrote and at the time it felt that's where the poem ended to me. But I can ...

Thank you I am never too great with grammar suggestion noted.

Thank you for your kind words, I do try to remember that some days aren't as easy though.

Thank you so much, I am glad others can see the meaning behind the words.

Sorry I meant chapter 5, should have checked that before I clicked post.

Absolutely amazing once more. The emotions are so vivid once more and the fear of Ethan makes the whole chapter full of such suspense! I honestly cannot wait for more, ...

This story is developing into a very interesting read indeed! Ethan showing a softer side for a moment here makes things all the more intriguing. I very much am looking ...

This has a very powerful emotional feeling behind the words, I myself suffer depression very badly at times and can truly relate to those words. The words seem to flow ...