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Well, that's good to know. I guess I'll know what joke to tell when I'm in a band :D But it seems like only a tiny select group would know ...

Thanks. The reason why the chapter title for this and the previous one are part of the Lord's Prayer is because they are all connected thematically and will lead up ...

Thanks for the review. A lot of what you said makes sense. The quality of your review's been decent so far, a great increase from that time when your review ...

Yeah I think you're right about Dave. There's an explanation after this chapter on why he's 'howling his eyes out' but yeah, I think it's a little belated. I think ...

For the numbers part, I've always thought that you write out numbers that are only double digits large? Also, he's secretly hoping that it was broken because he's in the ...

Okay... Thanks. :) Do elaborate next time though when you review. I'd really appreciate it :)

Yeah, the review's short. Try to think of more things to say whenever you're reviewing. I find that there's always something to say. There was this once I reviewed a ...

Well thanks, I think :D

Thanks for the review. You can be sure that I'll let you know whenever I need a review :)

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It's up to you haha, I have no suggestions. You know your character best :) I'm glad I've helped.

Thanks, this is a nice review!

Hmm thanks for all the wonderful feedbacks. I'll be sure to change those in the next draft. Could be a while though, because I'm currently just concentrating on trying to ...

It's a really hard case for originality, because this being fanfiction, there's little that is original to begin with. The most I could do is to add on to the ...