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  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: Heavenly

    What a beautiful piece! I can tell that you thought quite a bit about your stanzas, so well done. I have a few little problems. The second to last stanza ...

    Feb 23, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Hawk

    A very nice piece of writing, although I did pick up on a few grammatical errors. You switched from present to past, but keeping present tense consistant in a story, ...

    Feb 3, 2013


Too often we crave the extraordinary in life, without even learning how to cherish the ordinary first. Friend, I promise you this: if you can learn to take joy in the simple mundane things in life, the extraordinary will take care of itself, it'll be on its way, hurrying towards you. But if you skip the first part, it'll ever evade you.
— Arcticus