DakotaK

Hey hey hey! Wow, you are really good at poetry! This one was very beautiful and kind of sad at the same time. I loved the vivid descriptions, they painted ...

Ok, so I have a question. lol. How can you change your settings to receive notifications when someone you're following has posted something new, or is that possible? ~Dakota Knight

Ok, I revised it a bit. I have about 100 words left lol, so if you think I should take parts out or elaborate on other parts that would be ...

Hi Kat, Thanks for letting me know you posted some work. Wow, it was very good. I love reading/writing "ballads of the heart". I liked it because it could either ...

Wow, bravo! I loved your artwork. I used to draw a lot but I have to admit I have no talent what so every. I'm not any good at giving ...

Hi there Leah! So lets start off with a few nit picks: "Love". The word flows from her freshly scarred skin. This sentence was a bit confusing which takes away ...

Hi ya there! Wow, I really enjoyed your story it clipped along at a nice pace, took me for a spin, then set my down feeling a bit flustered but ...

Hey Walker, I know I asked you to do my novel but I have this really short piece I need reviewed (and basically torn apart) and I am a fan ...

Hi there! I'm a huge fan of your reviews and I need someone to really tear apart a piece for me. Don't worry, this one isn't like my novel it's ...

Hi again! Just a few little nit-picks: He stared into his eyes I think you meant to say "her eyes" The feeling eloped them both Eloped means to run away ...

Hi Bhayden, I haven't seen the contest so I don't know what you were going for but I really enjoyed reading your piece. It was very descriptive and sad and ...

Hi ya there! I really enjoyed reading your story. It was fun and light-hearted with a good sense of comical humor and moved along at a nice pace. I liked ...

Hi Spinelli, Wow, you had me laughing out loud. I could totally picture the whole scene. You did an awesome job of letting us get to know Fletch as a ...

Hi Midnight Rider, So I'm here to do a review. I'm ok with doing "long" pieces because if you read my own work, you will find most to be dreadfully ...

Wow. I'm really impressed, your story was awesome! It flowed very nicely and was full of color and life. I'm also impressed by how "complete" of a short story it ...