Daniel14

Thank you for your review.... And yes your review has surely helped me a lot n I'll look upon my mistakes and correct them..... Thank you for your help and ...

Daniel14 here for the review Its really a lovely poem. The word you have used somewhere highlights some personal experience i would say. This poem of yours reminds me some ...

Hey i really loved the poem, but i would just ask you to make some changes in the last line which says "yet still i love you" as you would ...

Thank you for your review prinesslnk and I'll surely look upon the suggestions given by you and remember about it when I write my next poem

Thank you for ur review wanderingcloud