DarkPrizm

Hey I've revised it and i was wondering if youd review it again because i enjoyed the constructive criticism you gave before!!

thats kinda right, glad you noticed the romance tag though. i think of like this, every one she talks to could be better than me and thus she'd leave me, ...

When you wrote this comment i was already starting another poem with the same concept but with bad colors, and linking them to the bad sides of relationships. or i ...

Hey Dark Prizm, here! So first of all I really like the punctuation you used it is very well done. I love Alice and Wonderland so to me this is ...

This poem is really good, i relate to it alot because I too spend most nights on netflix and various other outlets. last night i went to bed at two ...

yes yes thanks!

thanks for the review man! The first line you mentioned, "The tick of a grandfather clock made due stillness" bassically means the tick never lets stillness settle in, the word ...

Hey! thanks for the review. It was intended to be short and without punctuation. As for the meaning, its about two little kids running to get a story book past ...

Well thanks for the review! I made a lot of mistakes, I wrote it at 2am xD

thank you, I will touch up on it tomorrow, as im tired and I wrote this late x3

Thanks! I did revise it, and thanks for the review!

PS why are you up at 11 thats bad for your health

I was like 600 characters into a review for this but guess what? Computer died. anyways, this is a wonderful piece of art and i will no doubt be looking ...

ah i see. i get your point but i just write it on how i view it in my mind so there are my thoughts, thanks for the review though ...