DavidJones

Great chapter! I love it. I have to admit that i havnt read the first chapters you put up, i dont believe i was here yet, but i will go ...

Nice chapter. i liked the overall flow of it, but if its a sin to look at her without a barret, wouldnt Brother Povek be in a little more trouble ...

Thanks guys, nice to meet you all. hope to see ya'll around.

Start writing things that will make you laugh. Have fun, turn on some music and just write. Write about your day if you have too. that's what i try to ...

Thanks for the posts. I was not sure if it was any good. I didn't create a world for the story because it was just a warm up that i ...

Hi, its 3:30 in the morning and i wanted to write something and post it. I just wrote this a lil bit ago and want to know if i have ...

I think it is way to short, personally. Alot of people added some good things, but some things i think there should be fixed/added into the story are: How do ...

I liked the story, good job. Only a few things didn't catch my fancy in this story, the first was: you switched in between character perspectives by paragraphs. You wrote ...

Hi everyone, my names David. I'm 19 y/o. I love reading and writing. I tend to only write fantasy stories, i look forward to meeting other people who enjoy writing ...