DayDreamWeaver

Thank you for all of the advice! I don't find it rude at all, it was very helpful and i will definitely work on it. I gave up separating it ...

Thank you! I will start on the next part.

This is as far as I have gotten with this idea. Let me know if it is something I should continue. Thanks!

I can't wait to read it! It is such an interesting idea!

Hi Shade, Thank you for your advise on how i can improve it and yes, i would love it if you used the quote idea! I unloaded this because it ...

I think that this story flows perfectly together, it captures the perfect mood for this suspenseful tale. I would love to read more mystery stories like this. I love your ...