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  • Poetry » Science, Realistic Re: Synchronicity: Meaningful Coincidence

    Deadman here with a review for you. Just a quick warning, I'm not feeling the best so I apologize if I miss something. I jumped in and your first impression ...

    Feb 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: I Want

    Deadman here with a review for you today. This poem isn't bad at all. It's short sweet and to the point. You've got a nice concept going here. I actually ...

    Feb 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Falling Up

    Deadman here with a review for you today. This is your first poem? I wouldn't have ever been able to guess. My first poem is so miserable it's not even ...

    Feb 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Haiku

    Deadman here with a review for you! Interesting Haiku, I should hope it is about food. I agree with Serene, if I hadn't read the little description I would be ...

    Feb 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Click

    Deadman here with a review for you today! I'll be honest when I say that I wasn't not expecting this when I saw the title. However, upon reading there was ...

    Feb 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Bruises

    Deadman here with a review. Ooof, I'm tired so excuse me if a make a few mistakes while reviewing or perhaps miss something. Bruises, that's interesting, most people use scars ...

    Feb 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: I Survived

    Deadman here with a review for you. I'm blown away at this poem. I simply loved the whole thing, and everything about it! Nice format, splendid flow, and plenty of ...

    Feb 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: And for that I love you.

    Hey, your pal Deadman is here to give you a quick review. Well I can see the emotion in this poem, and I related to it, perhaps a little too ...

    Feb 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: you're all i need

    Deadman here with a review for you! First off, I'd like to say that this is a great poem. Next, I've been expecting poems like this all day. :) This ...

    Feb 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Smoldering

    Deadman here with a review for you! I'd like to start off with saying, that I clicked on this because the title caught my eye. When I started reading, you ...

    Feb 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: To love.

    Deadman here, and guess what? I've got a review for you! (haha, yeah not as creative as I'd hoped...) Okay yeah I suck at entrances, but let's focus on this ...

    Feb 14, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Humor Re: Jim

    Deadman here with a review for you today. Nice, story indeed. I haven't read anything about a caterpillar in ages! This is very interesting, and has a cool twist at ...

    Feb 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Adrien In The Poppy Field

    Deadman here with a review for you today. Short, but very concise. You started to get dramatic too. Since I know that's what you are looking for I'll start with ...

    Feb 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: I'll show him

    Deadman here with a review for you today. Bare with me, my shift key is broken so prepare for mistakes on my part. I'd like to say welcome to YWS, ...

    Feb 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Renewed in White

    Deadman here with a review for you! Beautiful, just beautiful! I love the poem, and it's quite an interesting topic. I mean mot people look at spring for rebirth, not ...

    Feb 13, 2014


By the sweat of your brow you will eat your food until you return to the ground, since from it you were taken; for dust you are and to dust you will return.
— Genesis 3:19