Deanie

Wow! I loved this poem to bits. I wished I wrote it. I like your layout, and I think you broke it into verse really well. I cannot spot any ...

A very nice little short poem which is about inspiration. I can't see any mistakes. I really liked this writing, because made this a bit different from many others. Through ...

Hi Leah, I really like this poem. I couldn't see any grammatical errors. I like the layout you chose to write in, and I really like your style. I really ...

Hi Blue! I don't think this is a rubbish chapter! I liked it a lot, just as much as the first chapter! I can't see any mistakes. I liked how ...

Really great poem! I think it was great how you added the lyrics in there, a super-duper idea. I usually like poems when they are broken into verses, but I ...

They are all really simple. but at the same time very nice. I loved the inspirational quotes you put up next to them. I don't exactly understand why you put ...

I loved this poem. I could see four things that bothered me a bit about this piece. One: My I love you This is a really little one, but I ...

I liked this poem. I think the title shouldn't have the If in it though. Its not about if she loved him, its about loving him. I find this really ...

Another really powerful poem. I think your really good at bringing across emotions. I find this poem is really deep. I guess its all about life and surviving and all. ...

I loved this poem. I made me think of parents fighting because of the child. I think the poem has a real great flow to it, and you put in ...

I like all these pictures. The idea of blurring them makes it really interesting to look at. It makes me want to look closer so I understand the image better. ...

I love the idea of this poem! The title is very interesting and I just love how you are telling about all the different types of stories. I think this ...

Hi! I'm not really one for commenting on art but I think you are naturally and artist! I like your first drawing a lot. Personally, I find it hard to ...

Hi Maddy, its nice to meet you. For a start I love the title. And the beginning line was good too. I love the story behind this poem, how you ...

I like this poem. It was like a short story/ poem type of thing. Some lines were a little too long I think, which can be shortened. Also in the ...