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Heya! :) I liked this short story. You wrote it in a way that it cold almost be true. There were a few sentences that were too long, at the ...

Hi there Achu, I liked the meaning behind this poem. I could tell it was about someone giving someone else a chance, and seeing what was buried deep withing themselves. ...

Hi Imtheceo, I don't know what I think about this, to be honest. Is this poem about how you don't like photos of you being taken? I feel like it's ...

Hey LindsayG, I really liked this poem. You used words to describe such a deep feeling, and that's something that's difficult to do. I think though you have a technical ...

Back again, Emmy! I liked this poem a lot! I really loved the pattern you used with repeating the lines. It was interesting, unique and made this poem memorable. It ...

Hi there Emmy, I liked this poem. It was simple and pretty description with a bit of story behind it. I liked it. It wasn't anything too complicated. Although it ...

Hi there, Terminado. I must admit that I am not famaliar with it. But I think you described the battle well, and it had little detaisl in it that made ...

Heya Scandalous, I'm sorry to be honest, I don't know much about America. Any symbolism in there is likey to remain hidden from me, except for the eagle. I did ...

Hi there, PumpkinCat, I thought this poem was okay. There are lots of little things that can be done to make it better. The first is layout. I think you ...

Heya StoryWeaver, Another great poem :) It has a great concept to us, and it left me feeling sorrowful, I guess. You have a great way with words and have ...

Hi again, StoryWeaver, I really like this poem as well. I wish I could know the titles of all these works though. It'd be nice. I think you have a ...

Hey there StoryWeaver, I think this was a brilliant poem. You have a very good idea here, and I think you use symbolism perfectly. I like how we're given into ...

Hey Soul, I read the previous chapter before I read this one, so I could get a flow of what it meant. I think it's a pretty good idea, and ...

Hello S.K I think your poem was sweet. Even though it was short it had enough emotion in there to make it pretty. Now I have some little corrections for ...

Hi Funkymomo, First off, I really like the idea you have written about. I really like the beginning because you have nice contradictions in there, like ends and beginning, rest ...