Deanie

Ooh okay. I need to work on giving them a good motive and actually letting the read know what it is. I will work on it :)

I will do :)

Hehe. I don't know if you remember, but at the end of the last chapter Ben and Maria are sent to walk the last stretch home where he confesses he ...

Thanks for the review :)

This makes me wonder what the rest of the novel will be like... I guess we'll see (or maybe just me. YOU already know xD)

Yayyy your back! Thank you for the advice - I will definitely work on that passive voice :) Also, I love how you really go the extra mile. I will ...

Ooh yes you are right about the title. Thanks for the review

This is not a bad review at all! I like your change of the sentence, so I will probably use it. And also, that was a typo I will change. ...

I love this! No critique from me... Please let me know when the next chapter is posted ^.^

Oh this is definitely better than mine xD

Hm it wasn't so much to get pro-supporters on my side, more so just to tell a story, and show how sad it can be sometimes. I will definitely try ...

Thank you :D

Thank you :D