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Chapter 2 Part Two The next morning, Aysel tried to do the ritual. It had been nearly two days since the fire, and Acelynn wasn’t getting any better. Acelynn hadn’t ...

Well I think everyone caught all the stuff that I was going to mention, so.... I'll just say keep writing! :D Deathcurrent

Hey Missunderstood ! This is really good, and since I've seen Zombieland, this caught my attention instantly. This part: ‘Hunter! Help! Don’t let the monsters get me!’ five year old ...

At sunwater : There may be some flashbacks, I haven't decided yet, but when she said magic she was meaning that she could use it. I'll try to make that ...

Aysel pretended to go one way and then went the other and shot past the fireman; who was now yelling for her to come back. Hell no! I’m going to ...

You should add an "I try to." option, because I most definitely try to but sometimes I'm able to get the words on paper and at other times...well, they run ...

If I forgot to Italicize thoughts it's because I copied and pasted this from my word document. Sorry for the confusion! I also wrote this in a spur of the ...

Wow! I truly did forget about YU-Gi-Oh. Thanks for bringing him back from MY forgotten memory. I think that my favorite part in this dialogue is: Joey:Oy -.-' Honda:Awwww Joey:I ...

Wow! I truly did forget about YU-Gi-Oh. Thanks for bringing him back from MY forgotten memory. I think that my favorite part in this dialogue is: Joey:Oy -.-' Honda:Awwww Joey:I ...

Wow! I truly did forget about YU-Gi-Oh. Thanks for bringing him back from MY forgotten memory. I think that my favorite part in this dialogue is: Joey:Oy -.-' Honda:Awwww Joey:I ...

Wow! I truly did forget about YU-Gi-Oh. Thanks for bringing him back from MY forgotten memory. I think that my favorite part in this dialogue is: Joey:Oy -.-' Honda:Awwww Joey:I ...

Wow! I truly did forget about YU-Gi-Oh. Thanks for bringing him back from MY forgotten memory. I think that my favorite part in this dialogue is: Joey:Oy -.-' Honda:Awwww Joey:I ...

Well done! I ask myself that question when I've just read something really philosophical. I truly like: Look at your reflection, what do you see? Is it what they tell ...

Wow, I really loved it! I'm in shock at how much emotion I pulled from the first line. Though in this stanza: Cracked upon the blinding darkness light pierced and ...

Prologue Aysel Erimentha sat at her favorite outlook, waiting for darkness to blanket the bustling city below. She'd come to sit and wait for her friend, Nico Perran, to arrive ...