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DeliriumNervosa

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Daughter of a Victim (Doom and Gloom Version)

    Hey, Delirium Nervosa here to leave a review. I really enjoyed what you have written so far and eagerly await the next installment. This piece is written really well, but ...

    Sep 28, 2021
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: growing-down

    Hi queenshadowgem, Delirium Nervosa here to leave a review on your poem. What can I say but WOW! That piece was extremely engaging and relatable. The way you have structured ...

    Sep 28, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Prayer for Brothers and Sisters

    Hi AlyTheBookworm, Delirium Nervosa here to leave a review on your poetry. I am not a poet myself, however, I really enjoy reading the talents of other writers. And your ...

    Sep 28, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Satire Re: The Prism of Perspective

    Hi Delirium Nervosa here to leave a review on your poem. Firstly, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece. I found the rhythm slightly uneven, however, I was completely enthralled in ...

    Sep 28, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Mental Breakdown Over a Safety Pin

    Hi Morrigan, Delirium Nervosa here to review your poem. Firstly, I would just like to say how much I enjoyed and resonated with your piece. The last stanza got me ...

    Aug 17, 2020
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: I have seen...

    Hi, Delirium Nervosa here to review your work. This poem is so lovely! The joy and happiness it conveys is amazing! I also love how you express your thanks and ...

    Jul 31, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, Culture Re: businessman's trip

    Hi mk, Delirium Nervosa here to review your work. First of all I would like to say I really enjoyed reading your poem. The message you conveyed was extremely relevant ...

    Jul 31, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: the luxury of lungs

    Hi Magebird, Delirium Nervosa here to review your poem. I absolutely adore this poem and the message it conveys! I love the way you compare the land and the ocean ...

    Jul 31, 2020
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: (Untitled)

    Hi, Delirium Nervosa here to review your poem. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem and the language features you have used to convey meaning and create emphasis on the points that ...

    Jul 31, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: The Wounds of Love 2.0

    Hey Em16, Delirium Nervosa here to leave a review on your work. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem and I resonated with it quite strongly! Heartbreak is one of the ...

    Jun 17, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Irony

    Hi thegoldenbird, Delirium Nervosa here to leave a review on your work. I absolutely loved this piece! I can tell this is a very personal piece for you! I found ...

    Jun 4, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: 'Slaver of Hearts

    Hi Anarki, Delirium Nervosa here to review your poem. I really enjoyed reading your work! Outlander is one of my families favourite shows and I loved how you used the ...

    Jun 4, 2020
  • Other » Dramatic, Romantic Re: an old suspicious letter

    Hi, Delirium Nervosa here to leave a review for you. I really enjoyed reading your letter! I was definitely able to resonate with the character and I feel many others ...

    May 23, 2020
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: If you can, be someone's sunshine.

    Hi Bhavya! I absolutely loved reading this piece! It is such a similar style to how I write and I love to read other people's ponderings and thoughts. You have ...

    May 23, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Damn.

    Hey! I am here to leave a short review on your work. I really enjoyed this poem! I love how you have used such a simple word to create such ...

    May 23, 2020


You'd better wise up, Pony... you get tough like me and you don't get hurt. You look out for yourself and nothing can touch you, man.
— Dallas Winston, The Outsiders