Demeter

Hello, BloodSunset! Unfortunately this left me feeling the same than bubblewrapped. I think it would better to have a short but touching, moving and deep poem, than to have a ...

Hey kittykat! Yeah, I think the Narrative Poetry would be the one. After all, you're telling a story. This was a little random, I have to say. The stanzas aren't ...

Hey, complexion! This wasn't bad at all. Maybe one of your first poems? It was a little emo, but that's alright. Though, leave my body to rot into nothing. For ...

Hey Feliza! Pretty name! So is it like "Eliza" but only with F? :D My name is Demeter/D/Dem/Demi etc. Luckily it's not my real name, though. Haha. So, welcome to ...

Hey, star! I liked your rhyming and lining – in most parts. He scampers up the hill. The sun, no comma here is shining bright. Joyfully, he this line (and ...

Hey, niteowl! The idea is great; it sure touches everyone (well, almost everyone) and I'm no exception. We sang and danced to cheesy pop songs because we believed In here, ...

Hello Stella! I couldn't quite get the story, but never mind. The poem itself was really beautiful. You say that you're no poet, but at least you're poetic person... does ...

Hey, Maya! I haven't seen you around in a while! I think the basic idea was actually very nice, I only felt that the job interview thing was too self-evident ...

Hello, Nolan! I think this has quite the potential to become a great piece. I have a few nit-picks, however. So many lives taken; Not one smile. So many souls ...

Heyz Spiritree! Welcome to YWS. It's a great place. And we're all nice and friendly, so you shouldn't feel lost at any point, haha :D What genre do you write? ...

Hey Lane, Welcome to YWS! They call me Demeter. Well, some of them do. Some of them call me by most interesting nicknames. Oh, by the way, I have to ...

Hey Pingu-slash-Liam, I absolutely adore both username and real name. That cartoon was awesome! Oh, I'm sorry. I didn't introduce myself at all. Okay, my name is Demeter, and because ...

Hey Sarah, Welcome to YWS! I'm Demeter or D or Dem(i) or Meter. I know a few Sarahs, it's a great name! :) Wow, publishing process?! You mean like real, ...

Hey, elements! Welcome to YWS! Don't worry about some people's (like mine) young age, there are lots of 18 years and up people here. "Adventures in NY" :D Sounds great! ...

Hi, Spikey! Hehe, I invented you a nickname :) Welcome to YWS! What's it like to live in India? I've never been there, must be exotic. So what genres do ...