Demeter

Hellooo! I'm Demeter! I'm sure you'll love this site, it's excellent for book freaks like us :)

I was just randomly googling for a place you could post your writings... And tadah!

Seriously, what obsession does everyone have about posting poems about fear? :) You did that, JustMe did that, I did that (though it's in the Dramatic Poetry section)... But let's ...

Wow, this made me want to write sonnets! Great vocabulary you've got there! And rhyming worked, too. It's true about that Yoda thing... :) i had to laugh when I ...

I really liked it!! :) And it's great that there's the "tear" dilemma that oneeyedunicornhunter tried to solve. It gives us something to think about. I liked the first and ...

You're very welcome. ;) And yeah, I know, it's difficult, I can't do that, either. :( Wow a lot commas in one sentence :) Why do I have to finish ...

Haha, I find it rather diffficult to review this, because yesterday I posted a poem with exactly same title and subject. The contents and the way it's written are different, ...

Woah, thanks for your great reviews! :)

Hey. I liked this! My favourite is maybe the third stanza, because it rhymes so well and the dilemma between "peaces" - "pieces" is kind of genius. Haha. :) The ...

I think it should have been a bit longer - it stops abrubtly. "Her body was broken and she laid on the floor broken..." - doesn't sound that good since ...

Hey, welcome to YWS! :) Very nice job here. Have you read/written much poetry? If you have, post it here - I'd like to read more! The rhyming works, it's ...

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Thanks a lot, niteowl. ;) Previous Silly Young writer Calls Herself A Distinguished Epic Novelist Lying In a Computer haha :) I like this game. DESPONCENCY

Oh, gee, I got the Q. Thanks a lot, folks. ;) Let's see... Q is for... aha! Quentin Blake!

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