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Re: The Postman
Jojo! Ah, I loved this - such a genuine, heartfelt story. I'm very glad you wrote it. I really like the way you told the story - there's just the ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Fiery Love
Hi, Leeanna! At first when I was reading this I thought "Hmm, I've seen poems like this many times before", but when I got further I realised that this was ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: The Way You Say My Name.
Hi, Anwesha! It's been a while since I reviewed poetry... I feel like I'm getting rusty. Outside my window it rained, While inside my heart it pained. I don't think ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Kyle
Hi, VuzzyCat! Aw, this was sweet. You obviously have a way with words. I kind of liked how we're thrown in the middle of the scene, without unnecessary explanations about ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: The Whispers in my Wishes
Hi, Crimson! What you have here is quite sweet. The ending and all the pondering could be very powerful, if I only knew more about the characters. That's a big ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Google Chrome Now The Most Popular Browser on YWS
Chrome is secretly the eighth horcrux. I liked that, even though I failed to see the logic. xD
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Masked Ms Moore
Hi there, Ben! Nitpicks: “They say she’s cursed, that Ms Moore,” the taxi driver groaned. Hmm, it might be just me, but I think it should be "Miss", since this ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Big City Girl prologue
Hi, Empress! This seems like an interesting story, judging by the description and the "prologue" of the prologue (before all the dialogue starts)! I really liked the first eight "paragraphs" ...
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: On the Border - Prologue
Hi, Paul! You know what, when I was reading this, I forgot that I was reading a work posted on a young writers' site by an aspiring author. This seems ...
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: Do you have a pre-writing ritual?
Fingerless gloves only make me think of Ash. o_o I wouldn't say I have any rituals. Probably get a bottle of water next to me or something, but other than ...
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
Okay, thanks Rosey and Nate! :)
Jul 21, 2011 -
Re: Post your pie here
For Charlie, a WHOLE blueberry pie!
Jul 20, 2011 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
Time of Incident (include your timezone): Has happened several times, not depending on the time of the day. This has been going on for maybe a month or so. Browser: ...
Jul 20, 2011 -
Re: And the Light Fades (chapter 4 part 1)
Hi Sarah! I hope you forgive me for not doing much other than nitpicks today. :) Tremulously the ground shakes. This sounds a bit Yoda-y... so maybe just move the ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: Shop on Amazon? How you can help YWS at no cost
I still don't get it. D: No but really, amazin'! (Get it... 'cause that's like Amazon... haha...)
Jul 19, 2011