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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Eagle and I

    So this was a beautifully, well-written poem! The flow was a bit choppy at times but not something to dwell over too much since it went on well for the ...

    Aug 11, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: My First Date... (A Contest Entry)

    Soo, Hi, I'm Demoness and I was intentially going to review this for you but I ended up just admiring it for it's beauty! Woww! I've never read anything like ...

    Aug 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Tree Dweller

    So, I've read this a couple of times now and decided over again that it's too massive for me to review... Yet I'll give it a try. The reason I ...

    Aug 11, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: deleted

    Helloue! This is a very strong poem emotionally - it brings up a sore subject and I think you've done a great job expressing the hurt one must feel being ...

    Aug 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Way You Say My Name.

    This is a really sweet and beautiful poem and I love your rhymes and the way you built up this text! I just had a problem with the first two ...

    Aug 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Stonger Than Love

    Heyy, VERY impressive to manage with that rhymescheme and still manage not to make any of them sound forced! The piece flowed on well and I liked the rythm too.. ...

    Aug 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Beyond Looks

    So I thought this was very good for someone who's doesn't consider themselves a poet! I like the structure and how every last line in each stanza rhymes with eachother, ...

    Aug 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Written In This Skin

    Okay so.. I was gonna review this but then I read MMM:s review and well... I also read you poem and you're writings are just so much deeper and advanced ...

    Aug 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Memoria In Aeterna

    Hellue! I'm Demoness, and here comes my review! Eh, so - I like the story you're telling here and like Meg said, it makes you think, which is good. You ...

    Aug 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Not Yet

    Helluee! This was a quite delightful thing to read, it was vivid, full of descriptions and it also flowed well... yet, I've got one thing to point out. Mainly, it's ...

    Aug 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Waves of Fire

    Hello, This is the Demoness speaking! I've come to review this piece! So.. I like this idea - with only three words per line and for the better part of ...

    Aug 11, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The beginning of the end contest entry.

    Hellue, IcyFlame! I haven't given up reviewing just yet, so hope this will come to help! ;D “Thoughts are very dangerous things,” declared Mrs Gumridge importantly, stroking her broomstick fondly.

    Aug 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Meaning

    Hello, I'm Demoness and I've come to give you a review of this work! What is my true purpise of life ? - I believe you mean "Purpose" And what ...

    Aug 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Needless

    How can I resist reviewing a piece with a title that overpowering ^^ Well, well, here I go. Baah, I don't know where to begin. I like the emotion and ...

    Aug 10, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: The Walk Alone

    This is an interesting though. I think we all feel like we just wanna be cut off from the world sometimes, so that we can think over the lives we ...

    Aug 10, 2011


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