Denouement

Well, i have no critiques for what you've already posted; but there is room to improve by including more characters (or where they excluded because you have a word count ...

Ha, loved the end. Romance isn't my thing, so i don't think i'll be able to properly critique the plot. However, i enjoyed this piece so it must have done ...

I enjoyed this, it's well written and i felt empathy for your main character. I only have 2, and they are only minor stylistic things. Well, i'm assuming your character ...

Seems decent enough, though you haven't mentioned some of Ireland's famous landmarks such as the Giants causeway and the like Your Literature section is rather...lacking. Maybe you could write about ...