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Re: True Forever
The poem is short and sweet. It follows a constant rhyme scheme, but you changed the scale at second verse. For the future I suggest keeping it at the same ...
Jun 1, 2015 -
Re: True Forever
The poem is short and sweet. It follows a constant rhyme scheme, but you changed the scale at second verse. For the future I suggest keeping it at the same ...
Jun 1, 2015 -
Re: .
I have a few tips and suggestions. First I think you introduced too many characters in one chapter, the first chapter at that. You can use some description to clarify ...
May 7, 2015