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  • Short Story » Spiritual, Narrative Re: Stones of Goodness

    This is a good story. Although very optimistic, you have tempered it enough that it simply seems pleasant. It is a lovely little tale, though it is very short. It ...

    May 25, 2023
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Icarus

    Thanks so much for the detailed review

    Mar 2, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: orchids and moonlight

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    Good pic. Tasteful and evocative. I hope the same could have been said of the poem. Its entirety too innocent and simple, and thus infidel to reality. You are not ...

    Feb 28, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Other Re: As the World Caves In

    Thanks

    Feb 26, 2023
  • Short Story » Humor, Horror Re: A Brief Bit of Murder to Start the Day Strong

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    Well-done.I mean it.The story feels personal and honest in a way not many tales so.The language is evocative and Impressive.You undeniably have a way with words.But perhaps the pacing could ...

    Jan 8, 2023
  • Article / Essay » Other, Realistic Re: Nostalgia

    Thank You. I like the tip about writing about the first person. Have a good day !

    Jan 3, 2023
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: As the World Caves In

    Thanks for writing such a detailed review

    Jan 1, 2023
  • Article / Essay » Other, Realistic Re: Nostalgia

    Thank you so much for taking the time and writing such a lovely and detailed review.Have a good day !

    Dec 30, 2022
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Fantasy Re: Crazy, creepy clowns (A parody of Spooky, scary skeletons by Andrew Gold)

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    Funny It Is despite the humor there.I mean It's self-deprecating but In a good way.Its tinged with a healthy amount of Insanity after all.I love Insanity ! Honesty though,It adds ...

    Dec 28, 2022
  • Other » General, General Re: Characters So Far

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    I am curious.Are you naming the characters with any particular objective In mind.Any nationality ? What's the kind of story you are looking to write ? Names carry a lot ...

    Dec 28, 2022
  • Other » General, General Re: Characters So Far

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    I am curious.Are you naming the characters with any particular objective In mind.Any nationality ? What's the kind of story you are looking to write ? Names carry a lot ...

    Dec 28, 2022
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: A Verdant Tree

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    It's very evocative.A poem has achieved true excellence when the verses,alongside being eloquent,also manages to convey a story.The tree's life,despite the simplicity of Its purpose or perhaps because

    Dec 28, 2022
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Eternity and a Day

    Thank you so much !

    Dec 8, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: an ode to absence

    There's a furious yearning in the poem,despite the resigned acceptance.You are an intelligent writer,and your poem this is not merely an expression of your feelings but an introspection of them.The ...

    Dec 8, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Iceflame// Chapter 31: Burn the Bolt

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    Very good.Quite the focus less on power stats and more on storytelling though.Create drama and don't just narrate.Forgive me saying so but the characters are a bit one-dimensional.Seek other perspecti

    Dec 8, 2022


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