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Thank you for such a detailed review !

Thanks!

Thank you for such a detailed reply.I will try to make my future works less typo-riddled and a bit more clarifying.

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Polish could be very good.The idea is unique and there's a twisted edge to it that can be really very fascinating if properly executed.The whole poem's message is a little ...

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'A Storm' is beautiful.For a subject so profound,it is strangely not excessively loquacious.The uncertainty, the elusive coalescion of the spirit is beautifully potrayed.You are a master in your craft

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The prose is quite beautiful.The grief,pain and the sheer undated anger of Poltianak ! Brilliant.Your story does not dive into cliches even if there were placed could have.The horror,the disbelief ...

You could try making it a longer story.There is a sense of poignancy here but you could try expounding on it.The characterization of the mother is insightful.The finality of his ...

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You could try making it a longer story.There is a sense of poignancy here but you could try expounding on it.The characterization of the mother is insightful.The finality of his ...