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Thank you all for such outstanding reviews! I like the way you guys are honest and helpful :D , Gryphon you had a very good point there but as you've ...

Great story! dont know any errors to say hehe =), hope you will write more into this story seemed very interesting to me. keep on the good work.

Heya Amniel! this is very good warhammer story, i usealy read pretty slow but this one was very interesting so i read it faster than usual, I'd wouldn't bet on ...

[/quote]Jeb was a wilderness guide[quote] I think you should write it like "Jeb was also a wilderness guide" because Jeb was his friend so Bane would propably know his work ...

Please Notice that this is my first story and this is the first time ive written a "real" story in english. but hope this isnt a waste of time... Sacrifice ...

Great prologue! The prologue reveals the story very interesting from the very beginning. i would write more about the story but i have nothing else to say because it has ...