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  • Short Story » General, General Re: My Aborted Child

    My mother would be proud. :P I didn't notice any errors that weren't pointed out by anyone else. A very well written piece of work. I wanna hug Eliot. :(

    Apr 4, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Can I Forgive You?

    I really liked it. :) Ah, 10 year old drama was nice. I feel bad for your main character though, her life sucks. I'm glad it's better towards the end ...

    Apr 4, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Maryann's Ethics

    Hey, I love this. Not many people can pull of third person well, but I think you did a pretty good job of it. To leave no room for any ...

    Apr 4, 2011


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