DomTheDumb

Pls post the chapters in story order 😭

If you truly don't use AI, as I hope you don't, then I apologise for the accusation! I'm glad you can understand why we have to be hesitant with this ...

I'm so glad you liked this :) Thanks for your comments :D I look forward to your read of Part 2!

I'm so glad that you liked it and that the mood, the emotions, and the misery were all so palpable. I look forward to your review of Part 2!

Ikr having to remove the line is so annoying, but idk if I can write a similar thing without being derivative. Ty for the rev! Spot-on, as usual :D Wanna ...

Oh ik what creepypastas are lol, I guess I just never came across this specific one But good work!

Lmao this week I start! Promise :)

Yo yo yo @tikaya @4revgreen Maybe something you'd like to get your mittens on, eh?

Thank you very much for the considered review! I'm glad you liked it :D

Thank you so much for the review, Moon! I loved your insights and I liked, especially, your focus on the characters. The next three chapters are up, apropos nothing :)

I largely agree with most things you've said, except for the "I shall haunt that night". It's a philosophical concept, really. That the night exists and shall exist outside of ...

Thank you very much for the review, AD. You know I 'preciate it! I may publish this later, so your notes on undercutting etc. are extremely helpful.

Thank you for the review and your insights. I'm glad you enjoyed :)

'preciate it :)

Hello, Alex! Thank you so much for the review and, icl, it was genuinely the best review I've got in a while. You're right about information density, of course, and ...