DomTheDumb

Ty! New chapter is up btw

As a note: this is not a stupid YA story about 2 sixteen year olds! Chapter 2 jumps forward 5 years, and the rest of the trilogy will cover their ...

Ch.1 is up ;)

Yup yup. Think I might post ch.1 of my novel here though. I need feedback and only like my closest friends and family have read it. I love 'em, but ...

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed :)

"Like, this should be a novel, not a short story!" Unfortunately, for me, I agree... Trouble is, I already have a completed novel I'm editing. 132k words, written in about ...

"I hope you think about publishing this when it's editing. As a first draft, it's really really solid material!" I plan to! I have a short-list of magazines to submit ...

"I hope you think about publishing this when it's editing. As a first draft, it's really really solid material!" I plan to! I have a short-list of magazines to submit ...

Had to edit the formatting on this motherfucker twice. Pls lmk if the formatting still doesn't make sense

The second part is just about a thousand words! I think the second part will really shine some light on things 👀 Thanks for the review tho. Everything you've said ...

Helloo!! Dude life has been so busy these past weeks, I couldn't write much less respond to reviews. But thanks for the rev! Also your notes, like Tikaya's below, are ...

I've never seen an English ghazal/shayari before! I love this one, dude. It's amazing. Virtually no notes, aside from the fact that I think it'll be EVEN better in Urdu ...

The final 2 vignettes of this work will be posted in ANOTHER part. The full story exceeds YWS's 8000-word word limit lol.

Thanks, man! > There are several sentences that can be improved in terms of grammar and coherence, but as a whole, this chapter does a good job of building Kademos ...

Bro I'm not going to write a drawn-out combat scene. A) I don't have the word count for it (I'm already at 11k out of 20k), and B) I HATE ...