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  • Narrative Poetry Re: Hidden reality

    It really does get the point across well. It's quite straigt-forward (which isn't my favourite style) but I think that worked well in this case. It's strong and assertive. Well ...

    Sep 8, 2005
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Vision In Black Nail Polish [need guys opinion]

    It's really good. Can't wait for the next installment. (Only hope someone would look at my work...)

    Sep 8, 2005
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Untitled still

    Alright. Not being pushy but could someone kindly critique it?

    Sep 8, 2005
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Vision In Black Nail Polish [need guys opinion]

    I have nothing to say besides I love it. Good work.

    Sep 2, 2005
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Untitled still

    Alright here's a story I've started (it's not finished). All critisisms appreciated. --- Prelude “I’m sorry, alright? We can’t be together, it’s not going to work, and I don’t trust ...

    Aug 31, 2005
  • Lyric Poetry Re: You'll Still Make Me Smile

    It showed a lot of feeling. It was simple but I like it. Good job.

    Aug 30, 2005
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Belonging (A song)

    Here's a song I wrote. The concept is still a bit unclear even to myself, but it's basically about fitting in and my personal girl troubles. Hope you'll enjoy it. ...

    Aug 30, 2005
  • Other Poetry Re: Midnight At The Art Gallery

    It's me again. LOVED IT.

    Aug 30, 2005
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Leaving Works Two Ways.

    Inertia, 'tis me. Love this piece. So much feeling and great imagery.

    Aug 30, 2005


she slept with wolves without fear, for the wolves knew there was a lion among them.
— r.m. drake