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Very nice. The rhythm was especially notable. Keep up the good work. Great interperetation of the picture. :thumb:

The rhythm (if it had one) was so weird to me. I loved it. :D

Thank you so much for the comment! Question: Are people on YWS supposed to thank people for commenting? On Deviantart it's extremely rude to not thank somebody, (unless you get ...

Sad. Moving. Loving. I like it. But I think the question thing is just too new to me... it just comes off as awkward. But I do believe it is ...

Er... why is it in italics? From the title, it sounds like an opiate is talking to the mass of others like him, and he is telling them to rise ...

Anyone?

Good for his age group. Tell him to keep at it.

Thanks. I get where you're coming from too. Looking back, it needs revision. Thanks and excuse my stupidity for posting it in the wrong section.

That was amazing. It reminded me of something from Aesops Fables or something. Love it.

That was a great poem. It was powerful and the imagery was nice too.

It really does get the point across well. It's quite straigt-forward (which isn't my favourite style) but I think that worked well in this case. It's strong and assertive. Well ...

It's really good. Can't wait for the next installment. (Only hope someone would look at my work...)

Alright. Not being pushy but could someone kindly critique it?

I have nothing to say besides I love it. Good work.

It showed a lot of feeling. It was simple but I like it. Good job.