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Re: Geek Moments
*looks at boyfriends ears* Hey, he could mod them to look like a vulcan's with ease!Wait, did I really just think that? *facepalm*
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: Robin Goodfellow and the Arms of Azrael Chapter 2
Oh those darn italics. I always forget to put them back in somewhere. xD Thank you very much! I'll post the next chapter as soon as I am able.
Mar 19, 2010 -
Re: Cruel Memories
Cruel memories fade as I live this facade. facade is pronounced 'fuh-sahd' so that particular rhyme would not work. A couple of spelling errors, but nothing drastic. I can't really ...
Mar 18, 2010 -
Re: Robin Goodfellow and the Arms of Azrael Chapter 2
Julia drove me home. She asked if I wanted to stay the night at her place but I declined. Judging by her relieved face at my rejection, she hadn’t been ...
Mar 18, 2010 -
Re: Robin Goodfellow and the Arms of Azrael
Completely nonsense title by the way. I get the feeling there is going to be no romantic entanglements in this story whatsoever. ----------------------------------------------- I was the product of a
Mar 18, 2010 -
Re: what do you listen to while writing?
I like listening to Gaelic Storm while I write lately. But I listen to just about anything that pops up, since my itunes is on shuffle.
Mar 17, 2010 -
Re: Mistress of the Bow: CH 1- The Fortune-Teller EDITED VERSION
I like the basic plot so far, but i'm definitely noticing some awkward diction. For a farmer, the narrative is really formal. While I was reading, the sudden paragraphs of ...
Mar 17, 2010 -
Re: Need average writers, no matter what you write!!!
What genre do you write, and why? I've always been a very big fan of romances. Call it the girl in me, but I love a realistic love story. I ...
Mar 16, 2010 -
Re: What does this username make you think of?
I think of a really cultured person who sits around in coffee shops writing novels.
Mar 16, 2010 -
Re: Descriptions of my main character---please read!
Question, how tall is she? If she's say, 5'11", she would be on the thin side.
Mar 16, 2010 -
Re: How to make a book longer?!
Well if you feel that the story is not finished, then it is time to go back in and start asking yourself what parts you think need more explaining and ...
Mar 16, 2010 -
Re: Raven Song
Beautiful poem! About a scarecrow if i'm not mistaken? I really like that you made them seem like both hope and failure at the same time. They told the scarecrow ...
Mar 16, 2010 -
Re: The Ballad of Ole Red
Ha! Yes I realized right after I put it in dramatic poetry that I had seriously flubbed. xD Thank you for noticing that! I have bad habit of forgetting to ...
Mar 16, 2010 -
Re: Wonderful Adventure
Your rhyming scheme puzzles me. There is no real set ABABA Pattern or however you want it on any of these stanzas.Right here for example it would have been just ...
Mar 16, 2010 -
Re: Odd Love Chapter 1
Because he's a complete stranger, that's why. Who knows what he wants.He could want her toes to make necklaces or something!Is Bek short for Rebekah? If so, pleasure to meet ...
Mar 16, 2010
