Dr.Atl

I sincerely hope you continue on with this. I started reading expecting the same old thing and it drew me in. before I knew it, the post was over and ...

No, thorough critique is what I wanted and needed. I may start this back up again, but it feels as if it has been done before. There are so many ...

I like it!It brings to mind Dio and Rush. My only problem is that last line of the second stanza Just stretch your hand and feel the fluffy cream (Stretched) ...

There, i've finished it. I was expecting there to be more than this, but it turned out to be a short story.If you see any problems, feel free to tell ...

Thank you for the review!I actually started writing this during NaNoWriMo, so the grammar and punctuation isn't nearly as good as it could be.I'll keep all of these in mind ...

I would love you like a fat kid loves cake if you reviewed for me. :D

The title:The Scribe The Genre:Action/Adventure Fiction The link:

Here's the first chapter, feel free to be as brutally honest as possible.

For some reason, your poem made me think of Terry Pratchett.I really dig these sort of poems because I enjoy just good old fashioned rhymes. But for those, who'd like ...

Whoa, this is some intense stuff.I have to say that it sent some serious chills down my spine.I love the last line and the one about first and last.I hope ...

First the ruby slippers, straight from the yellow brick road, dust still at the heel. This is my favorite stanza in the poem, it makes you think of dorothy, but ...

I'm liking the color, but it seems a bit pixelize and could use more definition..

I agree completely.The woman get waay too much hype for her mediocre writing.

Calon awoke to the sudden feeling of expectations, it buzzed in the air of the small hut he shared with his mother like a live thing. Twisting and twining around ...

Well, i've decided to try my hand at writing out a few stories i've had floating around in my head for I decided to do a search for writers' groups.Lo ...