Dr.Atl

Oh those darn italics. I always forget to put them back in somewhere. xD Thank you very much! I'll post the next chapter as soon as I am able.

Ha! Yes I realized right after I put it in dramatic poetry that I had seriously flubbed. xD Thank you for noticing that! I have bad habit of forgetting to ...

Because he's a complete stranger, that's why. Who knows what he wants.He could want her toes to make necklaces or something!Is Bek short for Rebekah? If so, pleasure to meet ...

Ah, thank you for looking over this once again!I'll try to beef up my posts sometime. I always forget to re-add the italics and stuff like that when I post ...

Ah, I see what you mean! In the second bit of this I have written, the king and queen are named and a bit of their background story is given. ...

Thank you for the review!Even though I re-read whatever i'm writing countless times, I always miss the most blatantly obvious stuff. I went through it again and picked out all ...

I sincerely hope you continue on with this. I started reading expecting the same old thing and it drew me in. before I knew it, the post was over and ...

No, thorough critique is what I wanted and needed. I may start this back up again, but it feels as if it has been done before. There are so many ...

Thank you for the review!I actually started writing this during NaNoWriMo, so the grammar and punctuation isn't nearly as good as it could be.I'll keep all of these in mind ...

Whoa, this is some intense stuff.I have to say that it sent some serious chills down my spine.I love the last line and the one about first and last.I hope ...

I agree completely.The woman get waay too much hype for her mediocre writing.