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  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: The Sterling Knight

    I love it when people use pictures, it's such a rare thing but really looks amazing. I personally would have resized the picture to make it a little smaller because ...

    Oct 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: 1

    Heya I'm here and reading your chapter. I found a few little nitpicks... The musketeer had presented the duellist to some of his colleague and they all seemed interested in ...

    Oct 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 28

    Did you know that Saved By The Bell is a song by the Bee Gees? Haha I just had to mention that. Anyway, I like your chapter. Although I haven't ...

    Oct 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Blood Thistle Trilogy Book 1 Prologue

    Oh my goodness, I love Scotland. Let's just say that I'm really going to enjoy reading this! :) You've got a great father-son relationship (it's ironic that I would say ...

    Oct 7, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: My First Spoken Word Poem (To my Father)

    I'm so sorry that you've gone through this. I can't begin to imagine what it might have been like. This poem just goes through it all and gets it out ...

    Oct 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, Narrative Re: Someone in the back seat

    Hello! I love myths. I'm not sure about urban ones but I guess I'll find out. ;) I'll start with the nitpicks first, and there really aren't many at all. ...

    Oct 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 17

    Hello! I've come to review, but there isn't much to say! I only have one nitpick... I'm not going to copy and paste the whole thing, but that very large ...

    Oct 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: The Boy, Delaney: Prologue

    I like your title, it sounds old-fashioned and fancy. Keep it like that. :) The name you chose for his daughter is so sweet. Is it Fae as in faeries? ...

    Oct 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Not Just A Box Ch5

    It's me again! I review one of your other chapters, because I love Doctor Who. I really don't like Supernatural, but that doesn't matter. :) It was really cool how ...

    Oct 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Lyrical Re: Laugh, Shadow-Raven, Laugh.

    Well that was creepy. What made it especially creepy was the tune you used. I don't even know what to say which would reach the word count for a review. ...

    Oct 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: California Girl: Chapters 5-8

    Chapter Five They sat down, and thought Langston didn’t sit right next to me... And though* Langston didn't... This chapter was hilarious. Jaime is quite a confident girl, that much ...

    Oct 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: California Girl: Chapter 4

    I'm back again. :P Please don't get sick of me. I'm loving your story so far, I can literally see this as a chick-flick movie on television. Good job with ...

    Oct 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: California Girl: Chapters 2 & 3

    Hey, I'm back! Chapter Two everyone was fussing about me by the time I got to lunch You should clarify what sort of fussing you mean. I know it's a ...

    Oct 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Dramatic Re: save the books!

    Ahhhhhhh thes'e r "my" ThouGhts exxxactlee>! I literally have a bookshelf where I keep hundreds of books and I just keep collecting them because I want my children to have ...

    Oct 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: California Girl: Chapter 1

    Hello! I'm here to review, as requested. I know this already has heaps of reviews, but I figure that I should start from chapter one. Anyway, I'll start reading now. ...

    Oct 6, 2014


The bird that would soar above the level plain of tradition and prejudice must have strong wings. It is a sad spectacle to see the weaklings bruised, exhausted, fluttering back to earth.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening