DragonKore

Thank you once again, Fabien. That's what I was trying to, limit my dialogue while creating a sense of sorrow. I didn't think I needed talking to create pity. Claudette: ...

Thanks for your feedback. You perceived it how I intended, and for that I am grateful. I greatly appreciate your comments. Note: It has an R rating. Not sure if ...

I'm still trying to figure out if you're serious or not.

I disagree that style isn't fitting. I think it fits quite well. The notion that life could be nothing more than a fad is an interesting and amusing one. The ...

Thanks for the feedback. You say I tell a lot and show nothing, but that was my intent. I wanted to make the story completely disconnected and emotionless. As for ...