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Hi there, so I took the time to give review on poem that talk about sin and how would you describe it all in poem. The first stanza clearly showed ...

Hi there, I think I ever give review on the original version / first. I noticed there was something different in your poem, especially the last part. which is kind ...

Hi dear, I like the details on the heart-shaped box. You use a simile to strengthen the attractiveness of the poem. Soft white squares thin as flower petals, Like the ...

Hi there, I'm trying to understand this short poem with regard to the strength of every the word you use. Writing a short poem seem easy / simple, but the ...

Hi there, I like the uniqueness of the poem and it's something new in terms of the theme and diction. Your voice an angel A silken boon, A reminder that ...

Hi there, It was so enthralling when you try to play with the rhythm in the poem. Naturally, it can bring a charm of its own. It was so exciting ...

Hi there, I quite like a few rhythmic effects that you have given in the poem. It feel more comfortable and fun to read, thus further enhances your poem. I ...

Hi there, I really like the messages you want to convey in the poem. I get something from it, which brings inspiration to me. Just a bit things that need ...

Hi there, The first thing I noticed, when reading your poem, I felt quite calm with the tone of voice. There are only a few typos here. 1. constalations- constellations ...

Hi Persy, I noticed something about all the poems that you have written, it appears with a nearly identical tone of voice. Bring an image of 'gloomy' and 'helpless'. Poem ...

Hi there, I am impressed with a poem that have a deep thought as you do in the poem. It was so enthralling to think well read with admiration. Tone ...

Hi there, Dream with review on your poem. A quite interesting poem with a unique concept. I can feel a very convincing tone of voice as well as full of ...

Hi there, the beginning of the poem seems interesting with the ironies of a pond and its ripples to moonlight and sorrow. Same with the breath of the wind (perfect ...

Hi IntelligentlyStupid, I like the concept of the poem that gives a clear circles on several things. It teaches us to break all the causes of a bad things, especially ...

Hi Shalie, I am so greatly affected with this poem. The theme looks simple but still able to attract the attention of the reader. Repetitions on each line, reinforces the ...