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thanks i just did it

I messed up on the spoiler...sorry about that :(

I am planning on reviling the identity of Zai in either chapter 5 or 6 when the two characters meet sorry to keep you waiting but its one of the ...

anytime :)

Thank You and enjoy the others :)

Thanks for the feed back and there is a little hint with fantasy but I'm trying to keep it a secret and it comes in later in the story. I'm ...

Thanks for the review and I did post the next chapter...It's POV goes back to Zai and I'm still working on the next chapter featuring Kade (writer's block :( ). ...

Thanks.......and you are the first to figure it out.....the hooded character isn't human ;) I am glad it was easy to read (its only long because on my document it's ...

oh I never thought about it that way :0 Thanks for the clarification and great job :)

Thanks for reading I'll put that into perspective and yes I am altering character POV's hope you like chapter 3 :)

p.s. his name is Kade I messed up and called him 'Kaden' so please overlook that little bit

You will have to read more to find more about Zai haha I am making the identity secret until later chapter so keep reading :D also keep checking out more ...

thank you so much :) as I have said this is only a ruft draft but I will take those into consideration. Personally I no idea what this story is ...

oh okay now I get it more thank you and good job :)

Wow that is a really powerful poem. However It really didn't make sense to me. I really don't know what made it not make any sense but it just didn't. ...