Dreamgirl

Thanks :D The info? Well I mean most of it is my feelings when I went there. But I guess if there are facts about the Holocaust and stuff because ...

Hey thanks for the critic, and no you didn't bruise me, lol I like being ripped on sometimes :P And as for the part with the rant when I said ...

So this was an english essay and the prompt I used was to write about something that deeply affected you and or changed you for the better. So I'm having ...

Thanks :D I totally appreciate your replys! Thanks so much!

Thanks! And thanks for the reply!!

So the assignment in my creative writing class was to write an Elegy. I'm not that good at poetry so... here it goes. I hope you like it, and I ...

I voted bookstore. What I can I say I love new books!! They make me feel all warm and fuzzie inside ^.^

The Clarinet is awesome!!! Yeah Band! The trumpet rocks but... I play clarinet, so I might be a little bias. Keep up the good work, I think you rock!

My problem? Whats your problem?

Well this is the Prologue to something I've been working on, enjoy!!! And please give me feedback!!!! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Yeah, I'd like more information too, becuase I think I'd be interested in doing that.

"I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO!" ((Haha, working on homework...))

I thought this was excellent! I couldn't stop reading once I started :D I can't WAIT to read the diaries come! I agree with Sam you really did a good ...

Thanks for the critic Sam :D I was wondering if anyone had a better title idea. I don't really like the title but I'm not sure what else to call ...

I agree with Xanthan. There isn't any rythm, and th rhymes are really forced. I like the idea of this poem, and I liked the story you seemed to be ...