Dreamwalker

I hate quoting wikipedia but you might want to read this .

Nightshade, you have earned my respect.

I highly recommend :)

Firstly, try not to put colour to your posts. Its a bit... too much. Secondly, is this not poetry? I would put this in the lyrical poetry section.

Alright so I'm going to be straight with you. And the corrections definitely helped! I'm quite happy with it now ;D So I'm going to give you my full review ...

This short story has nothing to do with fantasy xP. You might want to move this to general fiction. ~Walker

I'm usually not the type to leave short reviews... But the nitrogen one slayed me :3.

Alright, I can see the changes you've made and I definitely give you a thumbs up for the better. Okay, so, because I already quoted it up originally, I'm just ...

No, no, thank you kindly and I'm glad you took the time to review it! Made me really happy! And I'll think about changing up the word scheme :). I ...

Thank you for your kind reviews! I will definitly try to work on my syllable count ;D

At the same time, though, the world is such a big, wide place to a child. When you write, you should think of what a child sees. They don't just ...

Twilight series? = nay. The characters were flawed immensely and compared to literary genius such as romeo and juliet is a an insult. I'm not trying to be cruel but ...

Thank you Rosey and EmiAnne :). If you're wondering, in the Japanese language they refrain from saying I love you very strictly. They usually say Daisuki to establish that they ...

Don't worry! You don't fail :D. Not at all ^_^. I found this piece pretty interesting just some of the errors needed to be pointed out. Doesn't make you any ...

Thank you all so kindly for your reviews! I will definitly take it all and see what I can do! And at the moment, he doesn't seem to cynical, but ...