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  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: First Love

    Guess I' ve done what you have asked me to. Thank you for reviewing.

    Jun 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: First Love

    Thank you for loving it. :)

    Jun 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Ten past four.

    Good! Lot of feelings. And it looks like a Head stone writing. And what I mean by this is that, you can never respect anyone with anything, but can write ...

    Jun 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Puppet

    This poem is very nice. Though it had a single spelling mistake. I liked it a lot. Keep up your good work. Good Luck.

    May 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Lady Santa

    Any review is appreciated. I know how bad it is. And I deserve this. so no hard feelings. :)

    May 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Lady Santa

    I know! thanks for the effort you took to read mine and also comment on it. wen others didn't. Thanks :P

    May 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Lady Santa

    I understand when you mean that I lack in my grammar and prospective. Am trying hard to over come it, but it seems to get hold of me, no matter ...

    May 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Love

    thank you.. even i felt that something was missed out.. i will look into it.. your review is appreciated..

    May 27, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, Realistic Re: Anomaly of Nature - Me

    I personally liked it very much. Its a good message to the people. I liked your sportiveness a lot, its something that many have to learn (including me). keep up ...

    May 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Firsts

    This will make wonders if you format it as a poem. But other than that, this is simply cool. Just to the point without any hustle.

    May 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: The Bullies Can Eat It

    This is so cool. Liked it all he way through...

    May 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, Literature Re: Innocence

    Thanks for you review. I don't really know about Hitler handling the weapons in the war, I just wanted it to sound dramatic. Any way thanks for the lesson on ...

    May 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, Literature Re: Innocence

    Thanks for you review. I don't really know about Hitler handling the weapons in the war, I just wanted it to sound dramatic. Any way thanks for the lesson on ...

    May 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: And She stands

    Quite good! Personally as a women,I would've liked it more if u had kept it long. The title was good. And I liked your simplicity. keep posting.. Looking forward for ...

    May 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Ballad: Chapter 6

    Sad and repulsive. So this one is an novel, though I didn't really read the previous chapter, I kind of understood the story and the it is travelling. Its sad ...

    May 18, 2013


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