DudeMcGuy

Hey Shadow, I'm here, so let's dive right in! I'm going to go with overall opinions first and nitpicks last. First of all, I would try to introduce the main ...

Hello angelhunter, I'm here for the review I promised. I agree with the advice of the reviewers who came before me on this one. (TheDayBT and JabberHut hit the nail ...

Hello again Shadow, You re-reviewed my work, so it's only fair for me to do the same! You're already familiar with my style of review so I'll just jump right ...

Review Time! This is going to be long and picky (My style, sorry I can't really help it. There is a reason I don't have a review thread of my ...

Part two Engage! {“M…Men, protect your princess} If you want to make the character stutter his speech, then use a dash (M-Men). ". . ." implies a long pause or ...

OK review part 1! {There were many citizens who had walked from their homes to witness the bright burning court across Ringwater Bridge.} I would remove "had walked" with "emerged" ...

Hi dreamingthelife! I'm no expert, so take this review with a grain of salt. I was very impressed with the level of detail and description. A few of my favorite ...

Hey Shadow! I thought I would return the favor and review this piece for you. It's not going to be that detailed, because I think the other reviewers hit the ...

*Disclaimer* Please take this review with a grain of salt. It has been a long time since I read fiction in my free time. I'm pretty new here (first review) ...