Dugas

My fingers trace the elegant writing on the cover of Poisons and Antidotes: The Expert Guide . Books are underline/in italics. Short stories are in quotation marks. The knowledge that ...

This gave me a really warm feeling and I loved it. A great prologue, you wrote enough to make me feel attached to the characters so I would care whether ...

I think a little more structure could have done this a world of good. Instead of double spacing the entire thing maybe try something more like: I can’t see your ...

Very short, very sweet. My favorite line is the first, and it was an excellent way to start. Am I right in admiring the concept of spirit being much more ...