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  • Lyric Poetry Re: Legion

    Ancient in days, spawned ere the dawn of man I think it's were, right? Princes of hell, these sons of none Abominations Still walking this realm, Lucifer’s first and last ...

    Sep 28, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: College Life.

    Somewhere in somewhere-land, the word seems weird at first read- maybe this’ll help lives a ponderous beach that I stumbled to cross on by.- the grammar and structure here is ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: A howler from Mars

    hehehehahaha- I think my livers hurting, can't possibly be- no that's my kidney hurting. So yes you can see it was epicly hillarious and that's not very common in YWS ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Little Bird

    I used to have friends, but now they are gone. Too direct And from all the money I had, now I have none. Same issue here I look at you, ...

    Sep 24, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Why death if we all fight for life?

    My name is Eileen Roberts. Two months ago I gave birth to a beautiful girl named Jordan. When I was 17 weeks pregnant, after a common ultrasound, the doctor told ...

    Sep 22, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: So tired

    This is my worst poem I've ever done. This is the worst poem I’ve ever done, or- this is my worst poem ever- grammatical errors I forfeit the concrete images ...

    Sep 18, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Afraid of the dark

    He woke up in the middle of the cold night on March 9 as if someone had just screamed in his ear. The description on this sentence was very long, ...

    Sep 18, 2011
  • General Articles Re: The Things I Carry

    I look towards the map and decide on a destination; preference is extended towards the five boroughs and the Metropolitan Transit Authority- This statement suddenly seemed oddly stated, but after ...

    Sep 13, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Music and disparity

    ###Portions in italics are lyrics from ‘Here without you’ by ‘Three days grace’ and usually, portions in inverted commas indicate a conversation of the character with herself.### ‘Slip knot�

    Sep 13, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Feathers in the wind

    Well, it's a short poem that I didn't completely understand the concept of: Oh dear, imprudent fellow – You – why do you write like this? the portion seemed weird ...

    Sep 12, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Strength

    It sounds like it came from the movie my soul to take. The imagery was missing, rhyming went weell but you must have noiticed glitches ion ur grammmar, I also ...

    Sep 11, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Music and fury

    ##The portions in italics are lyrics from: Love the way you lie and not afraid by Eminem- Also, portions in inverted commas are the character talking to herself### Black, Peppermint, ...

    Sep 11, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Music and fury

    Black, Peppermint, ballet-flats; white, couture, purse in hand; the black skinny jeans, the silver-grey tunic, all seem to match in- an odd puzzle still lasts. Walking down an empty alley, ...

    Sep 11, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: games

    The the game is solved. The the kings stack up like Sherwood venison, I play red, you, black, and we skim two of the humours across quadrants, planes, ……….the Chinooks ...

    Sep 10, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Insecurity

    I always thought you'd be My prince charming. somehow this doesn’t rhyme Now I see you took advantage of my insecurity You never really liked me. I see the emotion, ...

    Sep 9, 2011


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings